Tuesday, August 5, 2008

I've edited all the post... so it's easier to read and there ain't as many mistakes as before.

Chapter 4; WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU?

Uknow heaved a sigh, he doesn't know where he was and his phone died on him. He walked around when he saw a guy, around his age. He approached him and asked desperately, " Erm, may I know where this place is?"

The boy turned around, he was pretty. Uknow was alittle stunned by his looks. " Do ... I .. know you?" The pretty boy was shy and took a few steps backwards.

" Don't be afraid! I won't hurt you! I'm Yunho from DBSK!" Yunho sighed, " It's cold.. and I'm afraid. I don't know where I am."

The boy looked at Yunho and sighed as well, " Well.. This is... HELL."

The pretty boy suddenly gave a high pitched scream and turned into a devil. He was trying to eat uknow's soul.

Yunho woke up with beads of sweat on his head. A mafia dragged him to the wall and shouted at him, " NOT SO BIG FOR A BIG STAR, eh?!"

Yunho tried to struggle, but his arms were tied by a rope. A seemingly strong figure appeared. The mafia bowed in respect as he walked towards him. The figure roared, " Yunho... HYUNG?!"
Yunho peered at him... It was ... Blackhead?
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Blackhead laughed loudly as he looked at the pityful Yunho.

" Yunho hyung.... Now you know how I felt like when you punched me in the face huh?"
Blackhead's voice has deep and coarse, no longer the sissy boy he was.

" You deserved it! You touched my girlfried, damned it!" Yunho spat on the floor. The mafia slapped him.

He asked the mafia to stop it and walked towards Yunho.

He pressed his throat against the wall, "" Yes, I did. We were doing a project together, so I touched her hand alittle to help her with the computer. So I was wrong? You picked on me, hyung. I will never forget what you did to me." Blackhead stared at Yunho.

Yunho was silent and Blackhead walked away. With a roar, blackhead commanded the mafia, " Leave him here. If he is gone.." Blackhead stopped and licked his lips, " you better run."
The mafia was silent, but he knew he could not run. Blackhead had contacts in every state and country. Blackhead slammed the door as he left. Yunho felt disgusted, he was covered with sweat and blood was trickling down his face. The mafia walked towards Yunho with a packet of rice, " kid, you want some rice? You've gotta earn it!"

Yunho nodded. The mafia laughed at the patatic star, "Now now, what business do you have with my boss? Tell me and I might just take pity on you."

Yunho hasitated, but he knew he had to eat otherwise he wouldn't have the strength to run away. So he decided to give in, " I saw him touching my girl's hand... I couldn't stand it so I punched him."

" So, he wasn't so tough in the past huh." The mafia thought to himself. "Dog, for the infomation, you get one spoon of rice!" The mafia laughed.
Yunho grabbed the spoon that was offered to him and ate it. "Okay Okay, last question and you get the whole pack of rice." The mafia continued," So what made him hate you so much?"

Yunho thought hard, " Perhaps that i didn't really like him much in the past.. He always touched my girlfriend. And I didn't like that. I called him names and I liked beating him up."

The mafia gave the rice packet to Yunho patted his head, as if he was a little puppy. Yunho bit his lip and swore that he would regret it.
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Monday, August 4, 2008

I felt the original plot was getting boring, so a twist!
Aggaa~!! Oppa. where did you go?


Chapter 3; Yunho goes missing!


It was sunrise. Changmin sat up on his bed as the sun shined at him. He pushed his blanket aside and wanted to wake the boys up when he notice something was weird.

He shook Jaejoong voliently, " Hyung!! Wake up! Yunho ... IS GONE!"

Jaejoong rubbed his eyes, " Is he in the toliet?"

Changmin shook his head. Jaejoong reached for his handphone and dialed Yunho's number. It led him to the mailbox.

Jaejoong thought hard about where Yunho could be, " Ahh, I don't think I saw him last night either.." Jaejoong pupils widen with fear as he continued, " I think Yunho has been... *gasp!* KIDNAPPED!"

Jaejoong held tight to Changmin's arm and rushed to the manager's house next door. And apparently, he had the keys to it.

The manager was shocked by the sound made by the slamming of the door.
He shouted at them," What do you think you are doing! This is my house! Please ask for MY permission before you enter!"

Jaejoong gave a soft apology and continued, " YUNHO IS KIDNAPPED!!"
The manager raised an eye brown and asked, " Whaat?"

Changmin nudged Jaejoong and explained, " Yunho has not been home since last night."
Jaejoong interrupted, " He must have been kidnapped! Definately!"

The manager laughed, it was short and sarcastic. " Just because he hasn't been home for a night and you dare say he has been... Kidnapped?" The manager roared with anger, " NOW! Return to the house and speak no more rubbish! He is your leader, and he certainly knows how to take care of himself!"

Jaejoong and Changmin returned to the house. Changmin gathered the boys at the hall. He stood in the middle of the hall and cleared his throat. With a formal tone, he spoke, " Hyungs, I think Yunho is missing."

Jaejoong pushed him aside with exaggerate hand motion he spoke quickly, " He is kidnapped! Definately!"

Micky laughed at the thought, which Jaejoong frowned at. Junsu fell into deep thought. Changmin gave him a nudge which almost cause him to fall off the sofa. Changmin giggled and asked him what he was thinking about.

Junsu gave a sigh and spoke, " I was out with jessica.. and Uknow yesterday.
We.. well we were walking when Yunho~ hyung wanted to go to the toliet. I pulled Jessica away .. And we didn't see him after that."

Micky pointed at Junsu and accused him for being a murderer for betraying his buddy for a girl. Junsu looked guilty and sad. Changmin patted his arms and tried to consol him.